the design looks great but i think its a bit lame to scale down the ads and make them purple tooshift wrote:http://aaronshi.com/gentoo/gentoo-front.png
just my opninion :D
the design looks great but i think its a bit lame to scale down the ads and make them purple tooshift wrote:http://aaronshi.com/gentoo/gentoo-front.png
If you squint, larry the cow kind of looks like a girl.calande wrote:blaksaga wrote:Replace the girl with larry the cow!aLEczapKA wrote:I don't want to sound like a biatch but lets cool down guys and look with a cool eye from a top.. to picture bigger view...
Your design looks great, no doubt about it - if gentoo website was about to sell insurances or something...shift wrote:Hi guys,
Here's a draft of my entry. It's somewhat finalized, but I'd like to get some feedback before I submit it to Gentoo.
http://aaronshi.com/gentoo/gentoo-front.png
What does this chick have to do with gentoo? Asiade that she looks nice nothing...
Sorry I don't wanna rain on your parade shift, its a great design but for different website, not for gentoo, cause
people do trust simple sites.
Gentoo website should be simple, functional yet beautiful. I admit its hard to achive.
My 0.02 cents...![]()
Linux, and computing in general is too much for men. Linux needs girls. Yeah! Whoo! Where are the girls on this forum, c'mon!
shift wrote:Hi guys,
Here's a draft of my entry. It's somewhat finalized, but I'd like to get some feedback before I submit it to Gentoo.
http://aaronshi.com/gentoo/gentoo-front.png
The mockup is based on 800px window width (780px + 20px allowance for scrollbars/borders).
My vision is that it will be able to adjust with the client's resolution. A fixed-width design for a content-rich site like Gentoo's isn't really the best way to go.
The graphic with the woman's face should also be on a rotation of some sort, I've got some more goodies here. The reason why I choose that image is to give the site a more "human" feeling.
Purple isn't an easy color to work with, nor is it the most consistent color across different monitors. I haven't checked it on another monitor yet, so be warned!
Let me know what you think.

I will spend some time to address this comment, as that's the same reaction that I had myself when I was working on a design project for large tech client about 18 months ago. So I will share what I've learned. This was a rather large project and being the designer, I was only a small part of the grand scheme of their strategy. The design was already done and coded and integrated with the custom CMS built by their backend team, then their management approached me with a CD collection of images they just purchased and told me to use some of those to make the main graphic on their site. At the time the main graphic was some nice techy stuff related to computers/networks etc. I opened up some of the images and every image contained people in various generic poses and locations. I thought they must've given me the wrong CD!! wtf?!What does this chick have to do with gentoo? Asiade that she looks nice nothing...

It's not much smaller, but I think it'll be hard to maintain all the various colors that ads come in and trying to not make them distracting to the site. After all, it's bad prioritizing to let advertments come first and distract the users from the content of the site. the vr.org ad is fine in its orginal colors, but unfortunately some of the others do not. In the future, who knows what other colors they will be? Unless the admin selectively choses the ads or have a guideline for ads...zubauza wrote:the design looks great but i think its a bit lame to scale down the ads and make them purple tooshift wrote:http://aaronshi.com/gentoo/gentoo-front.png
just my opninion

That is just an image mockup, it's by no means the final product!calande wrote:On the original web site, there are 5 ads, how will you place all of them on your new design?
Well great story but I didn't write _all_images_are_bad, I wrote and I repeat it: the chick has nothing to do with Gentoo.shift wrote:Alright, lots of feedback, I like that. I will try to address them all.
What does this chick have to do with gentoo? Asiade that she looks nice nothing...


okey, I don't wanna biatch anymore so I just shut upshift wrote:I don't know if you read into the story. I specifically mentioned the use of "human" images in technology sites, whether or not they specifically involve people or just everyday images. (...)
Nope.. but I am looking forward to see it. Thx for the hint.shift wrote:Edit: I just saw your sig, have you seen that swedish safety video? It's funny as hell and had that chainsaw thing as part of the video.
wow man u have some fscked up fontsdavideads wrote:Hi everybody,
I've been using Gentoo on my desktop for about 8 months, and it's the best distro I've run across for what I do.
I've got a draft of my submission to the contest up:
http://www.invisibleinstitute.com/gento ... mockup.png
Several notes:
* The real HTML design would be XHTML Strict, CSS2. This is for several reasons: mainly accessibility, standards compliance, and maintenance. Further, one of my least favorite aspects of the Gentoo site is the way it degrades poorly in text browsers. When I was doing a Gentoo install last Christmas, I could only access the handbook in lynx, and it drove me batty.
* In that vein, the site would be designed to scale nicely in visual user agents. By no means does the design imply a fixed width column -- I've done several sites now that incorporate a more elastic model where widths are based on ems (and, consequently loosely track the number of characters per line). Were this design to be implemented, both fixed width and elastic designs would be options.
* The upper image could/should be context dependent -- I used something a friend shot recently that I thought was very pretty.
I also wanted to say that I really like the work other folks have posted here a lot. Shift's design is particularly good. I know there's only a few days left in the contest, but I think that this thread (or another one) could be a useful place to discuss many of the design issues in a redesign of this site. If I am able, I'll try to respond to some of the work posted here with some constructive criticism, and I welcome the same for my own work.
Thanks,
David
davideads wrote:Hi everybody,
I've been using Gentoo on my desktop for about 8 months, and it's the best distro I've run across for what I do.
I've got a draft of my submission to the contest up:
http://www.invisibleinstitute.com/gento ... mockup.png
Several notes:
* The real HTML design would be XHTML Strict, CSS2. This is for several reasons: mainly accessibility, standards compliance, and maintenance. Further, one of my least favorite aspects of the Gentoo site is the way it degrades poorly in text browsers. When I was doing a Gentoo install last Christmas, I could only access the handbook in lynx, and it drove me batty.
* In that vein, the site would be designed to scale nicely in visual user agents. By no means does the design imply a fixed width column -- I've done several sites now that incorporate a more elastic model where widths are based on ems (and, consequently loosely track the number of characters per line). Were this design to be implemented, both fixed width and elastic designs would be options.
* The upper image could/should be context dependent -- I used something a friend shot recently that I thought was very pretty.
I also wanted to say that I really like the work other folks have posted here a lot. Shift's design is particularly good. I know there's only a few days left in the contest, but I think that this thread (or another one) could be a useful place to discuss many of the design issues in a redesign of this site. If I am able, I'll try to respond to some of the work posted here with some constructive criticism, and I welcome the same for my own work.
Thanks,
David
I'm not sure what you mean. Which fonts are making you crazy? The main fonts are meant to look like what the site might look like on a fairly standard display without antialiasing. Users would, of course, be able to scale them up or down as much as they want, and would probably want to turn anti-aliasing on as well, if it's available. But it isn't always available (i.e. Win95/98/ME).viperlin wrote:
wow man u have some fscked up fonts
but nice design, proffessional but still a bit..... OH DEAR LORD LOOK AT THE FONTS!
I'm not sure what you mean. I'm using a sans-serif font for the regular text, because it works better on the screen for reading. It's just good ol' Verdana, set to an approximation of what I'd think the site would look like on a screen with "normal"/100%/whatever text size. I agree about the main image, but with the overflow:hidden property in CSS, you can cook up images that reveal themselves as you scale up. If you design it right, this can accomodate elastic designs very nicely.calande wrote: Hi David, I like it, especially the main banner, it kind of brings in fresh air (are you scandinavian?) What I would change is the font for regular text. Serif fonts are good on images, or if used with a bigger size. I like the top bar with the search engine. I think you should convert your main image into a pattern (if you haven't already done it) so that you can use a variable width for your page.
I see what you're saying, but I think there's not really such a thing as "only" graphic design on the web. If they accepted the design, that'd be groovy, but the design is made with tons of ideas in mind that can't easily be represented in the design, like the elasticity of the design, the overflow:hidden trick with the top image I mentioned, proper structure, etc. I can only assume that if the Gentoo team is serious about a redesign, XHTML/CSS and general standards compliance must be high on their list of priorities. As it is, the site discriminates against blind people and people on text browsers, which seems very out of line with Gentoo's overarching philosophy, and something I'd like to contribute to. All I'm saying is that what I'm trying to contribute really sort of has to (if the site's going to be successful for a variety of users) include more than just the look and feel.And calande also wrote: Regarding code, the guidelines didn't mention whether using HTML, or XHTML, because it's only a graphic design contest. Gentoo people deal with the code, maybe they use templates, I guess, I don't know. The current web site uses HTML to render pages in browsers. Of course more and more people use XHTML, sometimes strict - I use transitional - but for a pretty big web site like Gentoo's, with language sites as well, and phpBB, it seem a really hard task to convert all the code into XHTML, and to validate it afterwards.

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